The Pen is as Mighty as the Knife
Carve your words
carefully, with studied blade
trimming unsightly grammar,
hollowing out weak characters—all
spool away as they are cut, like apple
peelings, the unnecessary, the contrived, the
awkward, fly from honed hand as imagery is
revealed. Saw-dusted adjectives and adverbs
lie in disgrace, on the
cutting room floor.
by,
Joan Ellen Gage
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